Opening two minutes - Changed and Final Synopsis

ORIGINAL SYNOPSIS 

At the beginning of our movie, we will have a fight to signal the intent of a fast paced action movie. There will be two villains as well as a victim where the villains don't quite understand his actual power. This fight scene will be set in an alleyway and the scene will actually start in the middle of the fight .

The victim doesn't seem scared to show that the villains won't get away with it and so one of his bits of dialogue will be " Do you even know who I am," Eventually the victim gets killed and the villains return back to base. This base is where their report to for their boss. 

We aren't going to show a full shot of the boss but extreme close ups because it will add up to the mysteriousness of the boss. Not only does this take the prevalence of him a bit, but it gives more prevalence to one of the villains who the audience will identify that he is trying to get away from this life.

Towards the end of the two minutes, the boss gives the villain a new target and then the villain receives a call from someone who wants revenge for the murder of the character at the beginning of the movie."

NEW AND IMPROVED SYNOPSIS 

The movie begins with the criminal on a motorway bridge taking a phone call from his boss instructing him of his job, and the criminal replying with dialogue "I'm ready".

The movie then jumps straight to the next day with the victim running away from someone but the audience don't know who, it's at this point that the criminal who the audience have seen previously taking the phone call on the motorway bridge appears, and attacks the worn out and injured victim. 

After a short struggle the victim looks to make a comeback at the criminal but has a knife pulled on him and this stops him in his tracks. 

After a blank screen the audience then see the criminal making another phone call to his boss with the dialogue "Job done" so the audience assume something has happened.

This is then confirmed with the next and final shot of the knife the victim had pulled on him being discarded and being covered in blood.